Hurricane sandy
has ravaged many states like Connecticut and Delaware. It has taken out power
lines all over the east coast. As much as 8.5 million homes and business without
power and has gone down to 5.6 million. It has left many people dead and
millions of homes destroyed. The president took his time to visit New Jersey, a
victim of hurricane sandy and give a helping hand to victims of the major
hurricane. I liked how he took time off his day to visit the victims and the election
is in a couple of weeks. It shows he cares about other things other than the election.
Miguel- I appreciate this story, I agree it was good for the President to take time out to do this. It was an especially busy time with the election so close. I think that you need to expand these posts and really begin a dialogue with your readers. This is kind of basic in it's presentation of information and be careful about capitalization. You want your reader to be focusing on your ideas not any inconsistencies.
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